This was a really cool song, man - I loved the melody over the chorus and the guitar break. I can't quite give it a ten though, because the ending was a little bit abrupt (which doesn't fit, imo), and the bass in Vs.2 could use some variability.

Good song but let down in places. That bass break didn't seem to add much at all, and the transition into it was rather abrupt. As was the ending, but I dug the outro.... as simple as it may be.

Not really my style, but I must admit this was well written. My PC crashed when I was going to listen to the version w/ drums (damn you myspace) so I'll leave this as a NR for now.