it had some really good elements, but as on overall piece goes it wasnt to good. the individual parts themselves were great though.

you can hear obviously tha these are just some riffs put together. they just didn't match well. You get some points the great guitar break.

Some parts were a bit boring I'm afraid, especially the verse. I like the chorus, though it seems to need some work as well. It was also very predictable in places.

Honestly, I was kinda lost while listening. It didn't kept me hooked, and lacked structure.

Uhh yeah. Not very cohesive between the metal and other sections. The metal parts weren't very inspired either. Try to work on making pieces flow better for future songs.

I like the intro (and most of the clean parts), but the Verse (and most of the distortion parts) are total crap. The only heavy parts that are any good are the pre-chorus and the outro.

Really didn't enjoy it, the death metal parts are quite bad, except for that happy part, in the guitar break. But you play it so ridiculously fast:P By the way, are your guitars tuned from lov to hifh? Haha

That was...uhhh....not good.

Intro was by far the best.